A “Guiding Text”: Using The Arak Anthology within the Classroom

When planning my E110 course for next semester, one text I have been attempting to incorporate is the Arak Anthology. Since the students are required to purchase this text, it would feel wasteful not to use it, yet I have not been sure how to actually incorporate it to its fullest potential. Doug Downs’s move/philosophy when using models, viewing them as a “guiding text” rather than the perfect text, offers an insightful way to consider how to incorporate the Arak within my own teaching.

Doug Downs rightly notes that “[w]riters need ‘goal texts’ –they’ve got to be able to visualize an image of what they’re trying to create” (287). I know as a student I always appreciate, when asked to write in a new genre, some form of direction. While the amount of direction needed has varied over the years, as a first year in college I remember wanting a model of college writing. I wanted to know if my writing was at “college-level” standards. When teaching a course predominantly made out of first year students, using the Arak as a “guiding text” would be beneficial because it shows them what other college writers have done and what work has been considered successful. Having this as a resource may ease some worries within the students.

Despite this benefit, when working with the Arak in my shadow course I have encountered two main problems when using this text. Certain moves that writers make, or don’t’ make, are troublesome and I wouldn’t want students to replicate these problems. Also, I do not want these model essays, even if they were exemplary, to become a formula that students would then use. Despite the need for a guiding text, I fear providing a model would limit the avenues my students would take when writing their own essays. The way Doug Downs’s discusses these guiding texts within this classroom is an essential move to make that reduces my concerns over using the Arak. When teaching:

Never, ever, in my [Downs] classrooms do we work with a model without me saying, “Remember, this is not what you are supposed to do. This is a way this has been done.” Saying this lets us talk about the difference. For this reason, I also shy away from the “best” possible models I’ve seen or can imagine—I usually show pieces that can be improved, and then help students figure out how. (288 emphasis in original)

Making this move before discussing the Arak with the class would hopefully prevent the essays from becoming models that the students would use. This discussion would also allow them to fully engage in analyzing the strengths and weaknesses of the essays. Framing the Arak essays with the idea that despite being published they can be improved allows students the opportunity to better engage with the texts. They can see the strengths and weaknesses within the essays that they can then apply, or avoid, when writing/revising their own work.

5 thoughts on “A “Guiding Text”: Using The Arak Anthology within the Classroom”

  1. Hi Sam,

    I really like the distinction you draw between perfect model texts and those that can be used as models for revision. A “this is what you should do” text will only take a discussion so far, and can even be counterproductive in the sense that it might limit students to imitation. You chose an awesome passage from Downs that sums this up perfectly.

    I think the way you suggest incorporating the Arak is a really smart one, especially since they have to buy it anyway. I wonder, though: What other kinds of model texts might there be? Like we were talking about yesterday, I’m thinking of going with They Say/I Say. My hope is that the basic templates collected in that book can serve as model texts in the sense that they give students the direction they want so badly while also leaving them room to experiment with their own ideas and language. This also makes me wonder what kinds of model texts we would want to search for outside of the Arak, if we wanted to expand the scope from only first-year essays.

    Anyway, yes—in many ways, I think models for revision are more important than models for good writing, since there is a lot of uncertainty among students as to revision versus editing, when to start revising, and how substantial revisions should be.

    -Dan

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  2. Sam,

    I think that, building on Downs, you offer here a smart approach to working with the essays in Arak. Beyond that, I really don’t have much to add. Go for it!

    Joe

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  3. Sam,

    I think that using the essays from the Arak Anthology as models of student writing in your E110 class is a great idea. Like Dan has pointed out, stressing that the essays from the Arak are not perfect texts is important since it keeps students from getting trapped in the idea of thinking that there is one “right” formula to follow when writing a paper.

    When teaching essays from the Arak to my own E110 class, I plan to emphasize that these essays are samples of good writing from my students’ peers: other undergraduates at UD who have very likely had similar college experiences to their own. I hope that doing so will encourage my students to recognize the value of their own writing. If we can help our students to realize that improving their writing skills can assist them in accomplishing their goals and to allow them to persuasively argue on issues that they care about, than the English Composition course will resonate more with them. One of the best things that the Arak does is that it shows that UD students can attain a voice on campus through their writing, which demonstrates that learning writing is highly valuable for a college student.

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  4. Hi Sam,

    This is a really thoughtful post. I agree that we should give students models of what we expect them to do. On a side note, this reminds me of Melissa Ianetta’s comment that went something like “If I want you to draw an elephant, the first thing I’m going to do is show you a picture of an elephant.” However, I also appreciate your concern that you don’t want these models to push students toward formulaic writing. I think we touched on this a bit when we talked about “authentic voice” earlier in the semester. While I think your concern is worth keeping in mind, I am not too terribly worried about it. I think mimicry can be a very important step in learning and it seems unfair to expect brilliant, original writing without offering students examples of what that might look like. In addition, I think you’re smart to look for ways the sample pieces are both strong and weak. This gets students thinking critically about the pieces rather than thinking they are simply something to copy and get an A.

    Jake

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  5. Hi Sam,

    Thanks for your post! I had almost forgotten about the Arak Anthology. I have been approaching it hesitantly is because I don’t necessarily feel that it is representative of “student writing.” The student writers in the Arak had a lot of time to prepare their submissions and received more help from professors during the composition process than the average E110 student. You point to a key moment that I reread several times in Downs’ response to Wardle, which I think rings with an important assertion made earlier in the essay: “The answer to any question about how a text ‘ought to be’ is: ‘It depends’” (277).

    I think it’s crucial to identify the more problematic moves the Arak writers make, as you point out as well. What kinds of entries into a critique of some of the pieces in the Arak would you suggest? Would you say the issues you have with it are more structural or centered on specific moves the writers make?

    Best,
    John

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