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Seminar, Fri, 10/03

Modeling our Work as Writers: Taking an Approach

I’d like you to think in some detail about how you might go about teaching your r5 essay in E110. The driving question is: How do you write like ———————? (Twain, Postman, Postrel, Oates, Didion, etc?)

Please take some notes in which you approach this question on two levels:

  • Discourse: What distinguishes the essay you’re working with? What is notable about its structure or aim? What name or label would you give this sort of writing to differentiate it from other sorts of nonfiction prose?
  • Style: What characterizes the particular voice or approach of this writer? Try to locate four or five moments in the essay—each no more than a few lines—where the writer does something you admire and which students might imitate in their own work.

I will then ask each of you to take about five minutes in which you talk us through how you might work with this piece as a writing teacher. I’ll ask you to again to think on two levels:

  • Discourse: What task would you set for students that might help them produce something like the essay they’ve just read?
  • Style: What writerly moves or techniques might students learn from reading this essay? (Try to pin these to specific moments in the text.)

r6: Wikipedia

r7: Restaino

To Do

  1. Wed, 10/08, 8:00 pm: Email me your hyperlink for r6. Read the Wikipedia pages created by the other members of this class.
  2. Fri, 10/10, 7:00 am: Field trip! Meet up in the parking lot behind the Morris Library.
  3. Wed, 10/15, 8:00 pm: Post r7 to this site.
  4. Thurs, 10/16, 3:30 pm, 127 Memorial: Attend Jessica Restaino, “Surrender as Method”

Seminar, Fri, 9/12

Discourse and Development (Cross-Talk, Sections Two and Three)

Fastwrite: Write and post a comment on an r2 that you have not yet replied to—or write a response to the comments you’ve received on your own r2. In either case, take us to a passage in Cross-Talk that we have not yet discussed.

Reading as a Writer: John Berger

Locate a brief passage from the first of essay of Ways of Seeing that you particularly admire. Try to describe what Berger is doing as a writer at this point in his text in a way that will allow you to imitate him in your own work.

E110: Helping Student Writers Come to Terms With Complex Texts

Read p1: Defining Berger’s Project. Then read the three responses  to this assignment we discussed in class on Fri, 2/21. What do these early pieces tell you about the strengths as critical readers and writers that these students bring to E110? What do they suggest about what they need to work more on?

Upcoming Work

  • r3: Society, Selves, and Schools
  • r4: Keywords and Figures in Composition (Wikipedia)
  • r5: Reading as a Writer

To Do

  1. Wed, 9/17, 8:00 pm: Read selections from Sections Four and Five of  Cross-Talk, pp. 127–391. Post r3 to this site.
  2. Thurs, 9/18, 8:00 pm: Read the r3 posts by your classmates. Comment on at least three of them.  Post at least one tweet to the #688 hashtag on Twitter.
  3. Fri, 9/19, 9:00 am: Read the second and third essays in Berger’s Ways of Seeing. Review the materials and lesson plans for weeks for to six of my Spring 2014 E110 class. Pay close attention to the phrasing of e1.
  4. Fri, 9/19, 9:00 am: Review the program for the Maryland conference. Identify three speakers or keywords you’d be interested in writing a Wikipedia post on.
  5. Fri, 9/26, 9:00 am: Finish reading Ways of Seeing. Bring five print copies of r4 with you to class. We will workshop them.

EventsDolmage

  • Mon, 9/22, 3:30–4:30, 127 Memorial, Jay Dolmage “Disabled Upon Arrival: Technologies of Disablement and Racialization at the Border.”
  • Tues, 9/23, 11:00–12:00, Memorial Dome, “Places to Start: Moving Towards Universal Design in the Classroom,” Brown Bag Discussion, Tuesday, September 23rd, 11:00-12:00

Academic Initiation: Learn the Rules before Breaking Them

As a sophomore in college, I went through a writing center training course in which we tutors-to-be read several of the essays included in Cross-Talk, most notably the Bizzell, Bruffee, and Murray pieces. While I found that this strictly theoretical approach left much to be desired (we looked at no sample papers, did no kind of role play, etc.), the readings led me to a realization about the term “discourse” and ultimately informed my work as a tutor.

As I discussed in last week’s post, during high school and my first year of college I followed a relatively misguided approach to writing papers. It wasn’t until I took the training course that I started to understand the almost mathematical side to a lot of academic writing. Breaking from reading only literature and literary criticism to reading about academic discourse as its own entity (also through the work of Gerald Graff) served as an important shift for me as a writer; in some ways, the training course benefitted me more immediately than it did the students I would be tutoring.

In other words, I believe the distinction between academic and other forms of discourse should, to some extent, be addressed early on in students’ college careers. Of course, there are many differences between the writing styles of various disciplines, but I am thinking more generally in terms of academic versus nonacademic discourse. What does it mean, exactly, to write an analytical paper rather than a reflection piece? In what ways do we define the word “argument” differently in the classroom than we do in everyday conversation? These seem like basic enough questions, but there are fundamental rules that separate academic writing from less formal modes of written expression.

Although Britton’s primary purpose in “Spectator Role in the Beginnings of Writing” is to examine the differences between literary and nonliterary writing and to notice patterns in the ways in which children acquire written language, he makes an important observation in his conclusion: “We give and find shape in the very act of perception, we give and find further shape as we talk, write or otherwise represent our experiences… In learning to control his environment [the writer] has gained a freedom of choice in action” (172). When discussing the nature of academic writing, it may be more helpful (and less off-putting) to think of perceptions instead of fundamental rules. Learning how to adopt the perspective of a professional academic writer gives the student agency in the writing situation, the tools he/she needs for full expression within the confines of the discipline.

The results of Braddock’s topic-sentence study and his ensuing reflections hint at a similar idea. Sure, he says, students probably “should not be told that professional writers usually begin their paragraphs with topic sentences” (202), because doing so would depict the situation as too cut-and-dry. Braddock advocates teaching topic sentences as a tool students can use to hone their skills and further ground their writing in academic discourse, not presenting them as gospel.

There are many tools and perspectives involved in academic discourse, and a writer need not use or agree with all of them to succeed; but some exposure to their existence and the ways in which they function in a piece of writing can help a student navigate this mode of communication.

Using Dialectic to Assume an Active Role in Academic Discourse

When I first entered the realm of academic discourse during my undergraduate career, I did not think that my own observations and analysis on a text carried much weight compared to previous scholars in the field. Because I was initially afraid that my own opinions did not have a place in the tradition of academic discourse, I would often approach my writing in a similar method to Britton’s quote from Harding in Spectator Role and the Beginnings of Writing: “…the student contemplates represented events in the role of a spectator, not for the sake of active intervention…his response includes in some degree accepting or rejecting the values and emotional attitudes which the narration implicitly offers..” (Cross-Talk p. 155) Rather than playing an active role as a responder to a given text by analyzing and questioning the views shown through a work of literature in my writing, I tended to assume a spectator role and accept the ideas laid out in a literary work. Once I understood that my own analysis on a text was important and could matter in academic discourse, I started to question literary texts and attempt to address these questions within my academic writing.

 

Through my experiences in discussion-based literature classes, I have discovered that what Berlin dubs the “hermeneutic approach” is an engaging approach to studying literature that allows the student to develop an understanding of academic discourse. In Contemporary Composition: The Major Pedagogical Theories, Berlin explains that “…the hermeneuticist truth is never fixed finally on unshakable grounds. Instead it emerges only after false starts and failures, and it can only represent a tentative point of rest in a continuing conversation. Whatever truth is arrived at, moreover, is always the product of individuals calling on the full range of their humanity, with esthetic and moral considerations given at least as much importance as any others.” (p. 248) Since the nature of academic discourse involves an ongoing conversation between participants, it is necessary for those entering this discourse to realize that there are many unresolved questions in the academic world. Because they are entering academic discourse, students can address questions and issues within the realm and attempt to bring light to them through their own analyses. If we explain to our students that truth in academe is never fully resolved and is constructed through the efforts of individuals, than we encourage our students to take an active role in in the continuous conversation that formulates academic discourse.

 

Guarding the Tower: Grammar as a Gateway into the Academy

Those who defend the teaching of grammar tend to have a model of composition instruction that is rigidly skills-centered and rigidly sequential: the formal teaching of grammar, as the first step in that sequence, is the cornerstone or linchpin” (Hartwell 208).

This concept, of grammar as the cornerstone to the writing process, was the ideology behind my initial introduction to essay writing. Throughout my seventh grade Language Arts class, my writing development began with copying sentences down whilst identifying the parts of speech used. Graded on how well we identified and applied these grammar rules, writing was introduced as a mechanical process that could be studied and perfected. These rules, applicable to the textbook’s constructed sentences and prompts were, for me, impossible to transfer over when writing outside the bounds of this classroom. With the textbook style learning personally ineffective, I wrote by ear. Forgoing the study of textbook grammar rules that I couldn’t properly articulate, I based my grammar usage on what sounded correct.

While this technique got me through my high school career, proper academic grammar knowledge was especially stressed in my undergraduate course, Literary Theory. While grading for argumentation and thesis development, the professor would also take off a third of a letter grade for every three comma mistakes. Not knowing the rules adversely affected my paper writing skills. I wished the rules my seventh grade teacher attempted to drill into me had stayed. Instead, I had to go back and learn The Bedford Handbook rules of commas. Explaining her attention to commas, this professor told the class that her Master’s Thesis received a C after her professor found seven comma mistakes—her argumentation was flawless, but her grammar was ‘subpar.’ With this, she was letting the class know that in the academy we will be met with professors who are “GUARDING THE TOWER,” that grammar becomes a way of “protecting the academy . . . from the outsiders, those who do not seem to belong in the community of learners” (Shaughnessy 292). Textbook grammar rules are necessary to know—learning by ear is not enough when entering academic discourse.

Despite typcially applying commas properly when writing, I still could not articulate them in The Bedford Handbook style. Expressing this frustration, my teacher of Literary Theory told me that we do not develop into better writers by studying a handbook. We become better writers by reading; by reading expert writers, not expert grammatists, we learn the way to enter academic discourse. Grammar is not something that can be ignored or left to the wayside. To learn its proper use, “any form of active involvement with language would be preferable to instruction in rules or definitions (or incantations)” (Hartwell 226). Reading expert writers, and then writing with their influence, allows one to learn grammar more effectively than drilling grammar rules.

When thinking on this experience as a future composition teacher, the significance of reading when teaching composition stands out. Through the implicit teaching of grammar and its ability to teach writing in general, paring reading with writing for begining student writers is essential.